Fates Hands Comments

Jawanda Hogg

I am stuck in this story I love it

Fiona Hsu

Such beautiful stories, just made me sad that they had to end. I could see these stories being transformed into movies. Can’t wait to read more from Lori.

Oni Blah

I’m on book two and I can’t get enough of it. I like how it’s all in one place so I don’t have to stop reading to look for the other books. I can’t wait to see what else is in store for all of these characters. 1q2w

Gale Lewis Mabley

very good, enjoyed so far

Rose RB Redmond

enjoying so far

Ashley McCallie

love the book so far.

Reader-757936

you switch from third to first person point of view constantly. You also keep quoting things that people aren’t actually saying. “With a chuckle he commented,” is not something you put quotations around. You’re writing is very poor. I can see this in the first page. This story needs a LOT of work.

Adrienne Hufferd

big fan!

Marama Levuimata

great

Reader-416545

is her name adira or adair? alsk loving this book! having a few issues putting it down and doing my work! 😂

Aretha Boyd

It's a great book I'm looking for book 2

Rose SB

Not one Grizzly will most likely eat James and the sheriff’s backside, but two!

Reader-396247

I’m not a big reader but this story has me hooked!!

Joanie Glennon

I have read all 3 Series and loved them lori. well done. I'm looking forward to whats next.

Reader-636547

Wow!! Not a big wolf fan but this is amazing story!

Clarissa Cowling

if this is part 2 of 2 what is part 1

meredith owens

so far I'm intrigued

Linda Skinner

isn't there somewhere I can buy this book? I am just getting into it and I can't open chapter 6. PLEASE TELL US SOMETHING.

Chrissie Teeter

so far so good

Brenda Davis

love this book .so far so good

Aryel Londer

good story

Reader-394257

oh wow

Trina Johnson

I love this series and the way you write

Rose SB

I was not prepared for that. To have to put your own child out of his own evil life is still heartbreaking.

Katia Hernandez

so far this is a great book I am intrigued with the story.👍

Tracey Graham Drury

I don't get how this works I just want to read the bloody full story 😫

Rose SB

Some people are just born evil

Reader-303662

so far so good

Jo Ann Boothby

I'm intrigued to see where the story goes and how it ends

Tina Kruspe

can’t wait for more

Meg Foster

very nice

Hannah Johnson

i love this.. wish I didn’t have to wait..sigh

Nicole Reid

loving this story. I was unsure at first but has me hooked

Courtney Stephan

so glad that they changed the name- how horrible, hoping the baddies get their just desserts! 1q2w

Melissa Ward

loving this book

Reader-907606

👍🏼

abz

1q2w. so far loving the book can't wait to see how things turn out. I try not to read comments for spoilers 😅

Asthetic dork

it's great!

Christine Rochester

1q2w so far I like the story. it’s so cruel what Spare’s family does to her. She’s treated like the black sheep or the unwanted child all because her mother didn’t want 2 kids. I’m so glad new mate took her away and I hope they develop a close and loving relationship where Spare feels loved and wanted.

Sheri Sack

👍

STEPHANIEJEAN STERLING

love it so far, just hope I can keep reading it

Tina Barden

soooooo, is her name Adira or Adair?

Santita Williamson

very good read, can’t wait to finish reading the next chapters

Rose SB

Nova is part Grizzly and unaware.

Rose SB

Lily has redeemed herself

Estie Viljoen

nice!

Dorothy Campe

great

Irene Crump

love this story so far

xcuse me French

Love this book Highly recommend it straight to the point kind a story no beating around the Bush.Just finished book 1 I'm on to Book 2 now hope Jack gets his happy ending like Alpha and Adira.

Theresa elwood

wooohoooo

Donna Hamilton

love this

Reader-342842

I hope this book is updated frequently. I’m really enjoying the story.

Jo Sim

enjoying so far

Jessica Carver

love this story

Robin Byrne

enjoying the story so far

Jayne Holden

amazing read well done flowed perfectly

LaQuana Buraimo

I'm loving it so far and can't wait to finish reading

Margaret Snyder

I'm hooked on this book. I'm trying to unlock chapter 6.

kellea roeder

oh yay the dr found the tracker!!!

Correne McNally

so good! loving it!

Beverly Ezernack

so far it is a good book

Jesica

good read

Halley Knott

Is this book and series available in print and where could I buy it? I prefer actual books to reading on my phone but I am definitely hooked on this!

Reader-710164

love this books, wish I didn’t have to wait for chapters though 🙁

Loki

quite enjoying this story!

Sarah Abbott

I'm so loving this so far 😍

Robyn Lynette Tingle DeVore

how can I buy the whole book

Jennifer Collins

I'm totally loving this book so far.

Kathy Ellis

good story so far

Theriarina

I absolutely loved this book!!!! Where can we read “A girl alone”?

Reader-444873

I love this book so far! Great story line and keeps you hooked!

Reader-613303

Really good so far!!

Reader-557521

i am enjoying this read!

Christina Vigil

I have been waiting for your next chapter to open n it hasn’t I’ve been waiting for over a month n nothing yet.

Amanda Van Roy

this is the best thing ever!!!!

Rhonda Gibson

Selena is definitely insane.

Sharon Milton

chocolate milk lovely

Sharon Milton

I really like this book and am enjoying it a lot

Rhonda Gibson

There was a demon that trapped Dargon's lion and Dragon himself. He's going to hate that he has done Selina's bidding for 500 years.

Rhonda Gibson

😻 Love struck kitty! Yes, he marked her, ooo bad 🐈 kitty.

Shelene Berg

this whole book definitely had me on the edge of my seat.

Katrina Mercer

Wheres the book Just A Girl Alone I couldn't find it

Bailey DeCarlo

this is the second time I am reading this book. I loved it the first time and I am loving it even more this round, as I am seeing details that I didn’t notice last time. thank you for making it multi species.

Kira Patenaude

Can't stop reading this book!! Very well written Thank you!!!!!!

Sam Davies

I really enjoyed this book

Victoria Smith

omg I love this book!!! I havnt finished it and I already know that I will buy it whenever it gets printed!!!

Rhonda Gibson

I'm thinking that the man/beast is a demon.

Aletha Lyons

love reading this. very Interested i the book form!

Destiny Chaney

second time reading the first book, what happened to the little old man? he was my favorite character the first time I read this

goldenfox.

Just love this book, it's putting you up there with some of my fave authors. God bless your beautiful talent.

Stephanie Warren

I cart put it down loving book 2

Carolyn Ingram

I love it. I just want ti be able to get the book. good job Lori.

what happened with the inner voice. left it hanging. goes from her thinking she is going crazy to Jack asking what is wrong and now she is making sticky buns.

JkBird

Good job Lori!

Daniela Esquibel

I love this book. i can not stop reading.

Paula Lewis

yup rule #1 should be done

Shirley Weber

I’m enjoying your writing very much!!

Reader-508383

Are there any hard copies if your work Lori?

Bella Lechonsito

exciting story

Jerica Fung

hi can someone tell me what happened to the book that dargon and ariana gave to the 3rd female child of rachel and archer?