Conquered by the Moretti Twins. Comments

  • Besucher

    I Love the Story. Just the use of the correct pronoun should be checked and in some places corrected.

    08/16/2025 19:39

  • Phoebe Martin

    I love this story so much, im obsessed and i wanna know more abt this story

    08/16/2025 11:07

  • LeAnne Mccollum

    I must be honest. I'm obsessed with this story. I just wish the chapters were longer. I have to know what is going to happen next.

    08/14/2025 23:34

  • Visitor

    love it so far

    08/14/2025 02:51

  • Jordan Davies

    really do enjoyed reading this look only small general confused but loving this so far

    08/02/2025 11:58

  • Saori Shishido

    quite like the story so far and really liking the characters.

    07/26/2025 03:18

  • Visitor

    Y is this chapter duplicated, it starts and ends with the same paragraphs

    07/25/2025 16:27

  • Visitor

    i love it so far, for some reason i really want enzo to get that snake and scare everyone lol

    07/13/2025 22:54

  • Visitor

    I love it so much

    07/12/2025 22:15

  • Visitor

    love it so far

    07/12/2025 04:05

  • Visitor

    I love this book it is very interesting and intense.

    07/10/2025 12:13

  • Visitor

    Luan is misheard as a female - should say he not she

    07/10/2025 05:02

  • Visitor

    Luan is misheard as a female - should say he not she

    07/10/2025 05:02

  • Visitor

    its really interesting and I like how the main lead uses words smartly.its kind of cool and easy.

    07/10/2025 01:14

  • Visitor

    a very good book

    06/28/2025 00:20

  • Michelle White

    I don't understand what's going on with this second story. is this the Alex from the first book when he was young? this is confusing. is it a prequel to The First book? it makes no sense to me.

    11/08/2024 04:20

  • Amanda Franjic

    The idea itself is nice, although I gotta admit I am a little torn whether I like the story or not... It is not because of your lack of knowledge regarding the language, but mostly due to you seemingly just being confused most of the time. More than anything you seem really confused about your own characters. You keep on misgendering them, especially Luan, the amount of times you depicted him as a female is astonishing. Also your kept on changing your mind about who Enzo's actual brother is, sometimes it's Alex, sometimes the other one, even though it is not always clear from the words, but in the context of the setting, it is. Also, you also kept on switching POV's, even though a chapter was written in a certain character's POV, which you clearly displayed each time, you kept on suddenly writing from another's perspective. Lastly, which could be attributed to your level of understanding of the English language, you kept on switching between tenses.

    10/19/2024 01:03